Technicolor Lover
Technicolor Lover
By: HX
A love-tone-poem pretending not to be...I dont know how I feel about it..But here it be
Technicolor Lover
somewhere
underneath my blue
Here against my will
I'm drowning in love with you
Somewhere in the distance
between
Hell and Serenity
I felt your colors
raining down on me--
I danced in peace and passion
and
kissed your lips in the depths of my mind--
Beared my cross for 7 days
Now I'm ready
to cross the line
Time won't waste me
If you come take me
now
AND
with our flesh
comes the divisions
rooted in their religion--
But you should know
I feel some kind of fire
about ya
Technicolor Lover
between
This space and infinite
I must admit
I want your rainbows
inside of me
posted by Quaheem @ 9:03 PM
6 Comments:
"I'm drowning in love with you
Somewhere in the distance
between
Hell and Serenity
I felt your colors
raining down on me--"
Yes!
This is the type of poem that group discussions arise from. I would love to get some insight from you on this...
I agree w/Essequibo - hot shit!
-Jamal
Very cool poem..I also read the post before the poem...fun weekend..i can relate to a lot of the things you said afterward...(the guy who made the average looking comment should have been punched in the face...how shallow/arrogant/rude can you BE!?!)
Anyway, keep it up bruh
hmmmm
I want ur rainbows inside of me...what....thats good stuff
ooh, that ending did it for me... that's hot man, luv it... every time :)
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