Water & The Grapes and The Vine
I have a truly spiritual relationship with Water.
Some of my best writings/ideas have come when I was either IN or AROUND Water. For some strange reason I have always been able to to have a direct channel to the higher power under those circumstances.
Tonight as I showered in complete darkness..candles lit..I was sent this piece and I thought I would share. It's not complete but I will share the work in progress.
The Grapes and The Vine
By: HX
You plucked me clean
but I
won't let you be the death of me--
This love today
stands crucified--
You've got the grapes
but I've got the vine.
Are you satisfied
with a belly full
of ruthless ambition
AND
when the tide turns
I hope you
can claim the same condition...
Hopefully the rest of the piece will come to me in a timely manner.
But this is all for now...
PeaceLoveandEternity
Q
posted by Quaheem @ 1:30 PM
5 Comments:
I'm definitely feeling it so far. I actually started clapping after You've got the grapes but I've got the vine. There's so much power in that line. You never cease to move me.
I agree with Rodney..that line works for me!...cant wait to read more.
Quaheem, I love that title...
...and reading your words...your writing is always stimulating.
ohhh lets have an adult swim together, maybe we both can emerge and submerge like a spiritual baptism? hmmm.
lol.
don't mind me, being silly.
great start! I think water is a strong connection to GOD and souls.
yes this is a great one quaheem - hope you're enjoying DC
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